I have never fought in the school when I was in the elementary school. But when I was in six grade, there was a boy who was my partner in the class, and he was so annoying and bossy. And he was often sarcastic to me. He ignored my study and exercise skills. At that time, not now, I was so upset. So I hit his arm, and he wanted to fight with me. I think, I should not fight with him. Because I and he were in the class, and also there were many kids that are my friends and his friends. If we fight, everybody in the classroom would see us. It was really disgraceful thing. They were all my friends or his friends. My parents or my friends would be disappointed to me when they knew that. And also, the person I was trying to fight is a boy, not a girl.
But on the other hand, I was very upset and provoked. There was nothing I faulted. That boy make me angry and I just tried to make him stop to annoy me. Also I felt confidence about my Taekwondo skill because I was a black belt and I tried hard to do well.Finally, he and I fought because I couldn't be patient about what i was feeling about him. i hit him many times, and also I was hit by him. It was really hurt. About 10 minutes later from the time we started to fight, we decided to stop because it was the time that the teacher would come. After that, we didn't annoy and talk to each other. I think stopping the fight was good thing.
Well, weren't you a feisty young lady!!! I'm glad you finally decided to stop fighting. Was anyone hurt? As for your writing, I think you should try and work on an interesting introduction and conclusion. Your introduction could be a question or some other hook. Your ending could be what you learned. Also, just so you know, I think you meant to say 'it was a disgraceful thing' not 'graceful'. They have different meanings.
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